Comments on: Unreadable underneath http://dragonwritingprompts.blogsome.com/2007/10/04/unreadable-underneath/ Writing prompts for speculative fiction writers of all ages. Wed, 20 Aug 2008 21:49:10 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=1.5.1-alpha by: Dragon Writer http://dragonwritingprompts.blogsome.com/2007/10/04/unreadable-underneath/#comment-93 Thu, 04 Oct 2007 04:19:21 +0100 http://dragonwritingprompts.blogsome.com/2007/10/04/unreadable-underneath/#comment-93 Here are the author's original sentences: "There was no shock on his face. It was lovely and unreadable as a doll's. ... Life flowed back into his face, filled his eyes, moved behind his skin until he was there, staring at me. The look in his eyes wasn't what I expected. Fear was still there and surprise, but underneath was worry." from The Killing Dance by Laurell K. Hamilton Here are the author’s original sentences:

“There was no shock on his face. It was lovely and unreadable as a doll’s. … Life flowed back into his face, filled his eyes, moved behind his skin until he was there, staring at me. The look in his eyes wasn’t what I expected. Fear was still there and surprise, but underneath was worry.”

from The Killing Dance by Laurell K. Hamilton

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